I made the second and final draft of my script. I changed some things in the story for it to make more sense.
These changes were:
- Making the aliens 100% nice
- Adding a scene in the beginning where the user sends a rescue signal to the aliens
- Making the aliens lead you back to your ship where you find out everything
- Adding a watch to the user that will reveal everything at the end
It helped my fill a few plotholes that Ana pointed out in the mid crit.
Now I can move one to the critical report!